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A post from Nafi; The Increasing Fuel Price

30 Dec

Guys, here is the first article for this week. It’s compiled by one of members Male English Home Manggis, Nafi. Please, you can check for structure, diction or others.

Fine, we have known four weeks go that the price of fuel was increasing. Who is increasing the fuel price? The Government, yah that is true. The government was increasing the price of fuel to make balance of Indonesia economy. But, Indonesian people become panic, because they are afraid if they don’t get better life. Indonesian people had been panic by the time the government increased price of fuel.

The government has decided about the fuel price, we are as Indonesian people have to accept the decision it, we should support and don’t make atmosphere worse. The government has considered to increasing of fuel price since they hold president election. So many people disagree, because we knew, the world oil price was decreasing several month ago. Therefore Indonesian people want to reject decision, not only from Indonesian people want to it, but also there was rejection from DPR members.

I’m one of people who disagree about increasing of fuel price, but I don’t want to make atmosphere worse. We just need to think positive and support our government. I’m going to explain government purpose, Jokowi said: “we will direct from consumptive subsidy to productive subsidy”. Therefore we have to change our paradigm, we must not think bad, the government will educate Indonesian people become independent and smart people, it means the government doesn’t want Indonesian people not only accept something but also we do something for increasing our productivity, we will be smart Indonesian people, although it’s really hard because all basic needs will increase because of it. We don’t need to worry about it, we can pass this moment if we always think positive and just enjoy our life.

We know when the government increased price of fuel, there was rejection from various parties. Almost all people in Indonesian areas did demonstration, to show their dissatisfaction to government decision. Almost all people did anarchism, burned tires, broke public facilities, and occluded street. It made atmosphere and traffic worse, of course it disturbed our activities. Meanwhile, there was not solution from demonstrator. It’s not important to do like that, we just need to make good atmosphere and enjoy our life.

Compiled by Shofi’unnafi

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7 Comments

Posted by on December 30, 2014 in daily life, My Indonesia

 

7 responses to “A post from Nafi; The Increasing Fuel Price

  1. Hardiansyah

    December 30, 2014 at 3:27 pm

    Congratz broo,,Ya I think it’s good beginning, we’re gonna be better by doing writing like yours.

    My points are just in content;
    1. You haven’t described poor people views yet, how big those population? bigger than 2/3? Increasing fuel price vs their salary vs their needs
    2. Was the economic conditions (including the global price) reasonable at that time?
    3. Was the government cash assisstance (200k per month) reasonable in coverring all effects caused by the increasing?
    4. Etc.

    Tq broo,,

     
  2. EnglishShelter

    December 30, 2014 at 8:42 pm

    I found out some grammar error in these sentences.
    1. The government was increasing the price of fuel to make balance of Indonesia economy.
    2. we are as Indonesian people have to accept the decision it,
    3. The government has considered to increasing of fuel price since they hold president election.
    4. So many people disagree, because we knew, the world oil price was decreasing several month ago.

     
    • Desy Ikasari

      January 1, 2015 at 3:46 pm

      I’ll try to correct those numbers

      1. The government increased the price of fuel to make balance of Indonesian economy.
      2. We are a Indonesian people have to accept the decision
      3. The government has been considering to increase of fuel price since they held president election.

      I also found one sentence :
      1. Meanwhile, there was not solution from demonstrator. (in my opinion it should be : Meanwhile, there was no solution from demonstrator)

      It’s very good writing, Nafi. Good job! Yeay!

       
      • Putra Wiranggaleng

        January 5, 2015 at 3:12 pm

        Well done, Desy! 🙂
        How about the second one?” We are as Indonesian people have to accept the decision” or just writing “We have to accept the decision”

         
  3. Putra Wiranggaleng

    December 30, 2014 at 8:48 pm

    Hi hi, i do not want to make any correction. Let others do it. Well, precisely i like your point of view. it is a nice writing. If I may suggest, please reread before you submit it. It is a kind of self-editing. Try to feel whether your writing is nice to read or you need to revise it. When I wrote something, I read more than 4 times to make sure that my article was good enough.

     
  4. Ari Aji Cahyon

    December 31, 2014 at 7:05 am

    I like the issue! Great idea! Just some corrections: Indonesian people, it should be indonesian / indonesians only. There is a repetation in using almost all people (would be better not to use repetation). You use conjunction (although, therefore, etc) and good vocabs related to the topic. Keep spirit Nafi. Thanks for the article. Well done! 🙂

     
    • Ari Aji Cahyon

      December 31, 2014 at 7:16 am

      I am sorry, Indonesian people is correct. No need to change. Hehehe, Keep sprit!

       

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