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A post from Kevin; My Expectation to the Government due to Banjarnegara Disaster

13 Jan

Banjarnegara is a regency in Central Java Province.Last 5 day age , banjarnegara got a very terrible disaster in Jemblung sampang village,karangkobar sub distric.The disaster is a landslide.The landslide resulted many homes broken, disappeared many souls, damage the farmland, and many souls hadn’t been found.
So many volunteers came from various regions and various societies.There are Indonesian Red Cross, Army, Police, Doctors,and student nature lovers of various universities in indonesia. All of them had a mission is to help disater victims.
I am as a student haven’t too much expectation for banjarnegara victims landslide.I can not do more, i only can give a little money and pray.I hope our govenrnment can give their concern more to help banjarnegara victims disaster like free tuition, free treatment, fix the farmland, and give them more knowledge about the main cause of landslidea .So, we will not previous expreince , we don’t repeat the same mistakes.
Acuatually, the nature doesn’t need us for their life, but we need it for our life.The nature has given a lot benefit life for us, but we doesn’t realize it. So, start from now, let us care for our environment, let us save our earth, give more concern to the nature. We can start with ourselves, and tell to other people that you know about landslide.So, we can live as consistent with the nature.

If you love the nature, the nature will love you back.

Writen by : Kevin S. (Male Home member)

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Posted by on January 13, 2015 in disaster, My Indonesia, stories

 

8 responses to “A post from Kevin; My Expectation to the Government due to Banjarnegara Disaster

  1. BugisMan

    January 13, 2015 at 8:52 am

    Good job kevin, I like it…. U are still young, and U showed us if U care and concern about society…. and also about nature…. U know what, every year we always get disaster, so that’s why…. We have to support stakeholder to concern about solving that case….. keep spirit my little boy….. wkwkwk…… I am proud of your writing….

     
  2. EnglishShelter

    January 13, 2015 at 10:03 am

    It is well-written and nice to read. I am overwhelmed with your article because I am from the regency. Thank you for caring. Anyway, I have a few comments related to your amazing article. Firstly, it is about the use of several contractions such as haven’t, hadn’t, and don’t. Well, in speaking it is fine to do that but in writing it is better for you to write have not, had not, and do not. secondly, it is related to the use of so. If you mean to connect two sentences, you better use therefore instead of so.

     
  3. elok surya pratiwi

    January 13, 2015 at 10:23 am

    woow,.. I like this article since I have a big concern in landslide either… I have some corrections for your article:
    1. “Last 5 day age , banjarnegara got a very terrible disaster in Jemblung sampang village,karangkobar sub distric.The disaster is a landslide” it can be “Last 5 days ago, Banjarnegara was struck by a huge landslide. The landslide happened in Jemblung Sampang village, Karangkobar sub district.
    2. “The landslide resulted many homes broken, disappeared many souls, damage the farmland, and many souls hadn’t been found.” it can be “The Landslide killed so many people, destroyed a lot of houses, and damaged the farmland. Moreover there are still a lot of buried victims who have not been found yet. ”
    3. “There (were) Indonesian Red Cross, Army, Police, Doctors,and student nature lovers (from) various universities in indonesia”
    4. All of them had a mission is to help disater victims. it must be “All of them had a same mission to help the victims.” without “is” and “disaster”

     
  4. alfredsteven

    January 13, 2015 at 1:02 pm

    good job little boy

     
  5. rangga fahrian

    January 13, 2015 at 1:21 pm

    Great job Kevin. This is what we call as a learning process, when we really intend to do something and we get some suggestions from others for our better improvement.
    While the correction from me;
    for telling adverb of time in the past such as “Last 5 day age”, you can use only one time signal “last/ago”, so it becomes “last five days” or “five days ago”.
    Then, for writing numbers which is only one unit (5, 8, 3, etc), you should write it in letters not in a number. For example, “last five days…” and not “last 5 days”.
    The last, pay more attention to the kind of nouns whether it’s countable or uncountable, plural or singular.

     
  6. stefanus21

    January 13, 2015 at 3:17 pm

    thank you so much brosis….
    i am really happy when my wriiten is read by you, and you don’t only read my written but you give some suggestion for my article.
    it is good to improve and develop my written.
    i will make a few articles again, and i will make better articles again than before.
    good luck guysss,,,
    keep spirit, keep innovating, keep creative, and keep praying.
    there isn’t hope in vain. 🙂

     
  7. Putra Wiranggaleng

    January 13, 2015 at 5:58 pm

    I think Kevin’s post is quite popular. Congratulation. Keep learning.

     

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