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Death Penalty for Corruptors in Indonesia

25 Jan

indonesian-rupiahMoney moneymoney and money
Everybody needs money for survive or enrich their live with these things. So many ways that everyone earns the money, by the job, beg it, or steal it. It’s a lifestyle now for earn the money because in now day, you cannot live without money.
In Indonesia, so many case about criminals act such as Kidnapping, murdering, sexual abusing, and corruption. Corruption such as a high level crime in this country because the corruptor steal the money in a lot of number, it can be million until billion number, it’s not easy to steal the money for the corruptors because they need strategies and colleagues to earn that thing. Absolutely, there is constitution about corruption’s act.
Indonesia have law about corruption act, for the convicts for the example, they can be jailed or execution by the shooters. I agree about the execution law. That we know corruptor absolutely steal the public money which the money must distribute to the needy people, especially for the poverty.Corruptorbecome richer and poor people become poorer. This is the worst thing that happened in our country, the poor people can’t do anything except languish. Everybody have the right for live but if she/she meant to do bad thing it’s the right choice for the punishment. I think it’s better to kill 1 corruptor than seeing many poverty people dying in bad condition.
It’s a lesson for us that bad attitude will get bad impact, so do the right thing.

Compiled by; Alfred Steven

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5 Comments

Posted by on January 25, 2015 in criticism, My Indonesia

 

5 responses to “Death Penalty for Corruptors in Indonesia

  1. panggih kusuma ningrum

    January 25, 2015 at 9:47 am

    Nice posting Alfred.
    It’s really interesting topic (or maybe only for me. Hehe… Because Law is my thing).

    Some corrections from me :
    – preposition (for, about, after, befor…etc) should be followed by V+ing : for surviving, for earning, for living… Etc

    – many case… It should be many cases…

    – about have/has : Indonesia have (has), Everybody have (has)…

    – Indonesia have law about corruption act…
    In my opinion… “Indonesia has regulation about corruption act…” sounds better.

    Keep blogging Alfred.

     
  2. manisya lis pratitis

    January 25, 2015 at 12:34 pm

    I think Mis Ningrum has already corrected all the grammar..
    I like ur opinion, Alfred. Coz corruption has already become culture here, maybe.. Hehe.

     
  3. Dearetha Citra Aulia

    January 26, 2015 at 6:49 pm

    I just give one more correction:
    “they can be jailed or execution by the shooters”
    i think it should be ” they can be jailed or executed by the shooters”.
    But i like your opinion about the condition of our country

     
  4. Putra Wiranggaleng

    January 27, 2015 at 1:01 pm

    For grammatical matter, I think Ningrum and Dea have already given the correction. Here I have some corrections related to sentence composition. 🙂
    So many ways that everyone earns the money, by the job, beg it, or steal it.—> I did not find any sentence here. How about changing this way: there are (so) many ways to earn money; by having a job, begging, or stealing.

    There is also no sentence in this statement —>Corruption such as a high level crime in this country because the corruptor steal the money in a lot of number, it can be million until billion number, it’s not easy to steal the money for the corruptors because they need strategies and colleagues to earn that thing—> There is no verb in the main clause. I think such as can be replaced by IS.

    It’s a lifestyle now for earn the money because in now day, you cannot live without money.—> is earning money a lifestyle.

    The second sentence is not coherent because the first sentence is about how people get money. I think it will be better if you focus on stealing to correlate with corruption.

    Over all, Alfred writing is good although I have no idea about death penalty.

     
  5. alfredsteven

    January 28, 2015 at 8:51 am

    i got it…brilliant advices for me, i got many lessons from u guys especially for grammatical things…thank u so much Ningrum, Titis, Dea and Mr Baron 🙂

     

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