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Neglected NaCl Molecules

03 Feb

by: Nita

Once upon a time a woman went with her two close friends. They didn’t go there for fun but they went there to work joyfully. Because they planted to go hiking mountain after work, to chase the view in the top of the mountain.

They wanted go to madura, because they had project in there. Madura it’s really diferent with jogja, but in there is really impressiv. It’s not about of beutiful natural scenery and not about typical food or just sight such as suramadu. But because the character of the resident were spirit and togetherness. They are farmers and they lived on the seaside. They only can to work in the dry season.

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Many children played in the field of salt. Even they played almoust 24 hour. So, how about their education. Ya they still school but only during the rainy season.

Their dream only wanted to work such as his parents become farmers salt. It’s not about they didn’t want to become doctor, and also didn’t want to become consultan or teacher. But because they didn’t have high dreams. They were afraid to make dreams.

They ever talked with us, we’re not angry if price of BBM increase, because they wanted to be like us to feel the comfort of being educated. They asked us, did you ever demonstrated to increase salt price. So that we can live like you to get high educated.

They made me and my close friends realized if beautiful view not only about nature like in beach or mountain. But we could see in other point of view that beauty can be meaning with saw them to dreaming.

 

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5 Comments

Posted by on February 3, 2015 in Uncategorized

 

5 responses to “Neglected NaCl Molecules

  1. Putra Wiranggaleng

    February 4, 2015 at 10:09 am

    The Title is just too scientific.

     
  2. manisya lis pratitis

    February 4, 2015 at 11:55 pm

    Don’t forget about gerund my dear, after+Ving πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
    Because, I am still learning, actually I want to ask what kind of text is it Mis Nita? Description or narrative?

     
  3. Erika

    February 7, 2015 at 10:42 am

    If I could suggest a few edits:

    It should be “Because they had planned to go hiking mountain after work,” not “planted”

    It is “the view on top of the mountain” not “in”

    “impressive” not “impressiv”

    “beautiful” not “beutiful”

    “They can only work” not “they only can to work”

    “They even played for almost 24 hours.” not ” Even they played almoust 24 hour.”

    “Their only dream is to be like their parents and become salt farmers.” Not “

     
    • Erika

      February 7, 2015 at 10:44 am

      “Their dream only wanted to work such as his parents become farmers salt”

      Sorry about the brake in my comment, I accidentally hit post.

       
      • Putra Wiranggaleng

        March 12, 2015 at 11:53 am

        Thank you Erika for correction. So sorry for writing a late reply.

         

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